Blog #9

Chapter nine of the Bedford Book of genres explains the concept of remixing and revising your work after a draft is complete. Revisions can be broken down to two sections. These two sections are revising based on your own observation and revising based on peer review. Your own observations can be looking for anything that can make your writing better in your draft. However, getting insight from people thought peer review can very helpful and let you improve things you didn't see. I find this is very important since many times I cannot see certain error or things that will make my essay better.